7/12/2014

"Jenna & Luke" 2 . 0 - Chapter 2



Jenna spent Saturday doing some laundry at the laundromat down the street from her place and cleaning her shitty apartment. She pretty much hated the place, but it was what she could afford within a reasonable distance from her office.  She was glad she only had a one-year lease and hopefully business would’ve picked up enough for her to afford to move somewhere nicer by the time it expired.

All day her thoughts kept drifting to the dinner at Luke’s place. She was nervous about it, but also excited about it. They had really clicked from the first moment they met and she was looking forward to spending more time with him and getting to know him better. 

Jenna also hoped Luke would open up a about his disability; she had no idea why he was in a wheelchair. She had done some online research on possible reasons; the results ranged from a spinal cord injury to a number of conditions that affected muscles and nerves.

7/11/2014

Chapter 4 of "The Outsiders" posted on Paradevo!

Posted chapter 4 of "The Outsiders" on Paradevo last night.

You can find it here: "The Outsiders" - Chapter 4

Am working on chapter 2 of "Jenna & Luke 2.0" hope to have it up either later tonight or tomorrow.

-Mille

7/05/2014

"Jenna & Luke" 2.0 - Chapter 1

I know many of you are waiting for me to update Jenna & Luke. Truth is I've been struggling with the direction the story has taken and I feel it's unrealistically happy and upbeat. I feel things have gone too smoothly for the storyline to be realistic. So... I've started on a re-write of the story. The characters are the same, but I will throw them a few curveballs and they will face some obstacles as they get to know each other and build their relationship.  Hope you enjoy take two. :-) 

Saturday July 5th: I thought I'd done a thorough job of proofreading before I posted last night, but a few errors slipped through the cracks.  My excuse for calling Luke Jake a couple of times is that I was watching 'Jake 2.0' while I was editing. And I'd had a couple of beers. Oops! ;-) Should all be fixed now.

6/26/2014

Chapter 3 of "The Outsiders" is up on Paradevo!

Posted Chapter 3 of The Outsiders on Monday, completely forgot to share the link here. Sorry!

Here it is!!

Enjoy :-)

-Mille

6/15/2014

Chapter 2 of "The Outsiders" posted

I posted chapter 2 of "The Outsiders" on Paradevo yesterday. Check it out :)

Chapter 2

Have about 900 words written of "Jenna & Luke" chapter 13 - hope to finish it soon, I've just hit sort of a roadblock and Sigrid and Jonas has kind of distracted my muse.

-Mille

6/10/2014

"The Outsiders" - New story up on Paradevo's Devotee Stories.

I just posted the first chapter of a new story on Paradevo's Devotee Stories. Please check it out. :)

Am working on a new chapter of "Jenna & Luke". It includes a rather large diamond and Luke asking 'the' question... Will be up soon - stay tuned!


-Mille

5/27/2014

'Jenna & Luke' - Chapter 12

By the time Jenna and Luke arrived back at the bungalow it was early afternoon. It was clear that Luke was tired; as many quadriplegics he had trouble with regulating his body temperature and spending a lot of time in the sun wasn’t great for him. Jenna had brought a large umbrella and had attempted to keep him in the shade as much as possible and Luke had said that the sea breeze helped keep him cool too. He still felt rather hot when she touched his cheek.
“Are you okay? You feel a little hot and you look tired.”
“I feel a bit uncomfortable,” Luke admitted. “And I am tired.”
“Come into the bathroom. I’ll try to cool you down with a few cold towels. If that doesn’t work a cold shower might.”
“Sounds like a plan,” Luke said with a small, tired smile. He followed Jenna into the bathroom and watched as she filled the sink with cold water and put several small towels into it. Then she unstrapped the straps across his chest and pulled off his shirt.  When that was done she he placed a rubber sheet behind his back so the backrest of his wheelchair wouldn’t get wet and instructed him to recline his chair a bit.
When Luke was sitting slightly reclined Jenna deftly wrapped a cool towel around his neck so it was covering his shoulders and upper back, and a second one across his upper chest.  She kept replacing the cool towels for the next half hour or so, until she felt him getting cooler.
“You feel like you’ve cooled down,” Jenna stated as she removed what she hoped was the final towel from Luke’s neck.
“I feel a lot better now. Thanks, babe. You’re the best.”
“No need to thank me. I’m just glad you’re feeling better.”
“I’m still kinda tired and need a nap. A couple of hours in bed in an air conditioned room sound very tempting right now.”
Jenna nodded as she dried his damp skin with a soft, fluffy towel and then she strapped him into the wheelchair again before she headed into the bedroom.  Luke adjusted his chair so he was sitting upright and followed her.