New story! "Every Breath I Take"

This story was emailed to me by Cathy, who has been following my blog for a while.  She wanted to know what I thought about it. I liked it, I think Josh is an interesting character, and asked if I could publish it. She gave me a "thumbs up" as she is eager to find out what people think about her story.  That said; she hasn't promised me she'll write further chapters, but I think that some positive feedback might do the trick. ;-)

The premise of the story is: Josh was born with a (fictional) lung condition that means his lungs have been slowly deteriorating his whole life. Apart from his lung condition and being partially ventilator dependent there's nothing wrong with him. He is fully mobile, but because of his lung condition uses an electric wheelchair to get around when he has to cover longer distances.


This is the first time I publish something from a guest author on my blog. I hope you like it - and that together we can persuade Cathy to continue her story. :-)

For the record: Josh's condition is fictional, a figment of Cathy's imagination.  It was inspired by the girl in this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RsPZhYfyNkc  Cathy told me that she has tried to research what her disease is without success, so she decided to take her own spin on it. I take no responsibility for medical accuracy in the story.

Chapter 7 of "The Outsiders" posted!

You can find it here!

Happy Sunday!! :-)

-Mille

Chapter 6 of "The Outsiders" is up!

Completely forgot to post the link here when I updated this story last week. Sorry about that!

Here's the link.

Working on updates for all of my stories, but I'm busy, so don't know when I'll be able to post.

-Mille

Chapter 5 of "The Outsiders" is up on Paradevo!

You can find it here!

Working on chapter 3 of "Jenna & Luke 2.0" - hope to have it up by the weekend.

Have a great week everyone :-)

-Mille

"Jenna & Luke" 2 . 0 - Chapter 2

Jenna spent Saturday doing some laundry at the laundromat down the street from her place and cleaning her shitty apartment. She pretty much hated the place, but it was what she could afford within a reasonable distance from her office.  She was glad she only had a one-year lease and hopefully business would’ve picked up enough for her to afford to move somewhere nicer by the time it expired.

All day her thoughts kept drifting to the dinner at Luke’s place. She was nervous about it, but also excited about it. They had really clicked from the first moment they met and she was looking forward to spending more time with him and getting to know him better. 

Jenna also hoped Luke would open up a about his disability; she had no idea why he was in a wheelchair. She had done some online research on possible reasons; the results ranged from a spinal cord injury to a number of conditions that affected muscles and nerves.

Chapter 4 of "The Outsiders" posted on Paradevo!

Posted chapter 4 of "The Outsiders" on Paradevo last night.

You can find it here: "The Outsiders" - Chapter 4

Am working on chapter 2 of "Jenna & Luke 2.0" hope to have it up either later tonight or tomorrow.

-Mille

"Jenna & Luke" 2.0 - Chapter 1

I know many of you are waiting for me to update Jenna & Luke. Truth is I've been struggling with the direction the story has taken and I feel it's unrealistically happy and upbeat. I feel things have gone too smoothly for the storyline to be realistic. So... I've started on a re-write of the story. The characters are the same, but I will throw them a few curveballs and they will face some obstacles as they get to know each other and build their relationship.  Hope you enjoy take two. :-) 

Saturday July 5th: I thought I'd done a thorough job of proofreading before I posted last night, but a few errors slipped through the cracks.  My excuse for calling Luke Jake a couple of times is that I was watching 'Jake 2.0' while I was editing. And I'd had a couple of beers. Oops! ;-) Should all be fixed now.